My first Love Poem..Ever...

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My first Love Poem..Ever...

Post  Eloquent_Poet on Sun May 25, 2008 8:38 am

This being My first Love poem,I fell of couple of times.
As it is dialect only hearts speak.
WARNING..
The content of this poem might be extreme
and un suitable for the ones with cold hearts
everything you read here will be real and that of
A mans take on love.Viewer discretion is advised.


Like an Orphan I roam the streets at night...
the darkest corners on the ugliest streets...
Lost without hope and the love of my life was my light...
Forgive me,though I left you...
Now Misery is my friend,My heart is solid as concrete...
Can't love another really,rapidly I depart in fright...
loosing weight by the pound and no appetite ...
I fight half wars,no longer free willed mr Jay in sight...
phuckit I Can't take the punishment,I'm waving the white sheet...
Pain is beyond comprehension and i got the right to fleet....
I must be the reincarnation of Boondheri these symptoms seem familiar?
do I face the same demise as he?
Not in million years,cuz i never loved a woman named Hodan...
but only you who her name brings me a joyous feeling......
I Can't promise much,but whatever my life is worth dealing...
Is yours,this is Not appealing...
You are my life support,My spine and joints,my lungs and kidneys...
Blood vessels and arteries in my heart spell your name at ease..
The ache in my head longs for your tender touches, please
consider the kisses while sitting atop of trucks watching the starry nights...
Now my dreams are tight like old re-runs of you,and one without you is a nightmare...
Not a perfect dude,but for you I'll sacrifice all of it here...
your the scale that held me balanced perfectly,now i'm just clumsy simply speaking sincere...

these days I stutter when ever i talk to you,
my knees get weak and until today I sweat fast at you presence too...
just can't admit the fact I really did loved you....
Overwhelmed with silence at times of emotions,rather let the shyness play the motions ,
let music say for me my shy thoughts...Remember Marvin G.a.y...
That night til 5am as the Orange rays struck from east?
Or H-town,even better With Carl Thomas on that Rainy evening in front of the stream?..


We slowed danced rhythmically in the rain,soaked or not we didn't care the world was ours,an intimate evening at it's best..
We even played the song over 3times and didn't give it a rest...

No love is perfect,but wallahi, I've been through the ultimate test...
Though at beginning the feeling at time was foreign to me,best of the best
Lest,my mistake,I really didn't read the "How to love for dummies" book before we dated...
remember like the first to touch the moon, your the first lady i ever cooked for ...
And now I have traveled 5 continents,to see if this symptoms you give arrest ...
But,yet i get no relieve this pain remain intact, under my camouflaged shell...
The time ticks for me,like child with serious hemophilia,and this cut is deep...
I suffer,And my iillness is inner bleeding, isn't mendable unless of course,
My doctor,my investment my sincere soulmate,shows remorse,
The one .the most beautiful in gods creation comes and lifts
this spell that binds me, suffocating me slowly till my last shahada...
The future is bleak not brighter,even the earth feels my pain,thus reacting with drama
Tsunami and earth quakes killing thousands with cyclones and climates not known to men...
to make up for the pain of true love in the Midwest...
thus I ask you Kindly,To do consider and help me bring the world back in normal beat....

Now that this hour long poem came to an end I wonder,Like many times over,is there truly one way love?
I refuse to believe so.






Now Admin..You have my confessions... pale


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Re: My first Love Poem..Ever...

Post  Admin on Thu May 29, 2008 1:53 am

Lol, I like the forewarning at the beginning. I havenít been here for awhile, due to my hectic schedule, but I apologize that I havenít read this earlier than I preferred. I like the whole theme, but Iím as sure as Iím with my existence that this isnít your first love poem. I can analyze a lot of things in this poem, but I donít want to put your on blast saxiib. Inyar baan u kadinayaa.

Ps. I sure as hell do, and Iíll make sure to use this in my advantage, in case I ever want to put you out publicly. Lol hehe
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Re: My first Love Poem..Ever...

Post  Eloquent_Poet on Thu May 29, 2008 7:51 am

Blast me...lol
I doubt that,
Unless it was an "April fools"
I never intentionally wrote a love poem?...
Ps. How would you know if this is just an figment of my imagination?
Than again,Only one can confirm it.
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The true Dialogue of lovers..(between him and her)

Post  Eloquent_Poet on Sun Jun 01, 2008 1:52 pm

These are the memoirs of two people,
in their own words,
Their complex take on love.Funny but true.
Enjoy.

SHE SAID..I'm Missing You
Have you ever bothered to realize
how much you mean to me?
I care so much for you inside
and miss you so deeply.


He replied..More than words can describe,
Everyday & Night there isn't moment that pases by,
lWhere you're not on my mind,

SHE SAID..My mind is always curious about
the way things might have been.
As days go by and time goes by,
I look back once again.


He replied...I would hate to send you on a worthless journey,
But you're place is here right beside me,
Thus,you never left my heart

SHE SAID..All the time I held you in my arms,
I had the whole world right there.
There you were, comforting me with
all of your charms.


He replied, Baby thats what lovers do,
I make you strong where you're weak
May not know it but,I really did complete you
And vice-verse,our difference compliment each other,


SHE SAID..Every little kiss from you
was like a dream come true.
This love that I have inside my heart,
it all belonged to you!

He replied..And i hope it still does,
Did you realize foes that pose
as our friends,were jealous of what we had?
Did we fought ever?I just thought about that,never!



SHE SAID..It's funny, all those little things
I never thought I'd miss,
Like all those conversations we had,
or the first time we kissed.


He replied...Yes how we'd converse of random and off the wall topics
Though,it's Strange can't remember vaguely The kiss?
I recall, in the beginning those awkward moments of bliss
lol,when you'd say,"i don't kiss"
And no, i really didn't forget our kiss,
It was slightly past midnight you were back from some town west,
stunning as always,blue jeans and red windbreaker jacket,
hugged you tight,I loved that scent of you with your tantalizing smile,
I'll spare the details,as is public subject,


SHE SAID..I guess that what I'm trying to say,
is I miss and love you more each day!
It hurts me not to see you,
or not to know if you're ok,


He replied...Sad how the world works,
Baby, the feeling is mutual and though is equal,
the pendulum never swings to favor love's sequel,
Realistically, I honestly believe true love gets the last chance,


SHE SAID...I want you to understand
that I loved you from the start.
And I want you to know,
no matter how many miles
we may be apart,
you'll always hold a special place
in my heart.


He replied,If Allah permits you'll return to me,
As my love for you was true and premature like mystery to solve,
It has grown,the seeds that you planted has blossomed a tree of unconditional love,
Now it has begotten It's fruits which are ripe,
only for you to pick,and no one deserves it more than you


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Now if the sun raises every morning and the moon comes every night
and everything in gods creation is where there supposed to be,than
Whats between I ---------> You?
I SAY Love.

The question is once more,Is there really Such thing as One way Love?

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Draining of my.....

Post  Eloquent_Poet on Tue Jun 03, 2008 9:20 am

The toughest task has passed,
The draining of my thoughts at last,
drowning with grudges from the past,
time has elapsed too fast
I'm at ease now,
me and my love are at peace now,


I'm glad you missed it, loves back and connected
perfected and tested by shame and neglect
eclectic,evil listed good intercept it, spells lifted moods shifted
swift and gifted
time invested,hater tested,love gesture
at pace glanced,yet not interested,


Though is a world full of foes
who knows, the hi's and lows of these fire hoes?
constantly portraying friendly pose
damn you hoes,got me wet and fallen like the pedal on a rose
next time i'll check their nose with these elbows
and so it goes,as the Brits put it "it Blows"

AND THIS IS HOW I'MA END IT..
SUBLIMINALLY BLENDED...
WITH A SOMALI SONG..
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