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Post  classy01 on Thu Apr 10, 2008 2:59 am

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Post  Admin on Sat Apr 12, 2008 8:39 pm

I like it!
Well done, mate.

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Post  coconut0 on Mon Apr 14, 2008 12:15 pm

I don't mean to come across as being mean or inconciderate but your poem seems to be all over the place(well atleast to me it does) I know am not perfect myself.

Admin lol @ your aviator(ka daro dibi dhal)

Ps. Did you know one of your poems is all ova theatres in birmingham?
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Post  classy01 on Mon Apr 14, 2008 10:53 pm

Cocunut: I definately don't judge people like that, im a person who accepts people's views. Everyone doesn't always like what i write but i learnt to accept.Razz Either way i write poetry to grow from certain struggles in life not entertainment. Thanks for being honest.

Was the Ps. for me or Admin?

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Post  Admin on Tue Apr 15, 2008 1:19 am

lol @ the ps ...

No, I was never informed. Isn’t that considered to be plagiarism, or is this the autonomy of our fellow Somalians? So tell me, which of my poems have they managed to torture? Lol

Ps. Leave my avatar alone, will ya. Its a very meaningful piece, just look deeper! lol


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Post  coconut0 on Tue Apr 15, 2008 5:21 am

Classy don't get me wrong love I was not being judgemental or anywhere near it and am sorry you feel that way. I believe that when you post a topic you expect a feedback!


Admin lol look at you so eager to know the poem those hopeless somali folks tortured, anywayz it was the somali reunite one. I knew you didn't know about it, I think you should sue them... how about I get magac yashoodo oo sedexan and you can take it up with the queen lol.

About your aviator or should I say you ex-aviator, bal what is soo deep about a heart that has an arrow through it? To me its more devestating rather than deep,to see such thing being advertised by THE admin lol nevertheless care to tell me what's behind it?
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Post  Admin on Tue Apr 15, 2008 11:32 am

Well, sent me the name list and I promise to mention your help to the Queen –by the way, how do you know this?
It wasn’t arrow, but a bullpen going through a heart, which meant a lot to me. Not all can see the art in art…miyaad fahantahey!?

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Post  coconut0 on Wed Apr 16, 2008 1:02 am

lol the names are too much to list lakiin let me list a few bal:

cabdi carab dheer
cali calool jawaan
maryan maryoleey
shamso shakshuuko

if those four ^^ are found then all the little sidekicks SHOULD be found.

how do i know this? lets just say i've seen it.

about the heart and the bullpen going through it, was it you that got your heart broken or you that broke a heart? lol its really the only explaination that comes to mind when i looked @ that pic. aniga wan ku fahme ee adiga ma i fahantay?
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