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Fairytale Smile

Post  classy01 on Wed Apr 09, 2008 7:24 am

I seen it in your eyes
Itís not hard to see
The fairytale smile
To avoid reality


Ps. I wrote something short but meaningful, if i think of something else i might continue.. but if anyone wants to reply??

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Re: Fairytale Smile

Post  Admin on Wed Apr 09, 2008 10:19 am

I seen it in your eyes
Itís not hard to see
the fairytale smile
to avoid reality

I heard it in your tone,
Itís hard to ignore,
The beauty in your words,
Demands to give me more,

I felt it in your touch,
The warmth of your handsó
Imports the comfort;
of a man,


(I'm actually in class, doing this!) Nice!

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Re: Fairytale Smile

Post  coconut0 on Mon Apr 14, 2008 12:31 pm

Classy is it my eyes or u keep changing your font color?

Admin lol shouldn't you be doing work instead of writting poetry?

Ps. Very short, simple and nice!
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Re: Fairytale Smile

Post  classy01 on Mon Apr 14, 2008 10:49 pm

Haha..Oh depends what mood im in, that's when the colour changes.lol. Thanks for love anyways.

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Post  Admin on Tue Apr 15, 2008 12:40 am


I was just taking notes which seemed pointless at the moment, so I was killing my boredom. But thanks for the advice; I should take it into consideration next time Ölol

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Post  coconut0 on Tue Apr 15, 2008 5:29 am

Classy I hope your never in the mood for a BRIGHT color, I don't like them.

Admin you know there is more where that came from, Just raise your hand lool!
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