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Dear Diary

Post  coconut0 on Sun Mar 23, 2008 3:19 am

What do you do when someone takes your heart away?
And your souls gone so far away.
Wishing that you just died today.
Am tired of being mad.
My entire world seems so sad.
Why did it have to end so bad?
What happened to all the promises you made?
Why am I wondering if love is a game?
Played by those who want fame.
Why is it that it’s ‘ME’ you blame?
Why has love left us in shame?
What have we gained from this pain?
Why can’t I fall in love again?
Why is my heart left with a dark stain?
Why am I feeling so painful?
Why didn’t I listen when they said “be careful”?
Damn I’ve never felt so awful.
….my body feels so dreadful.
And my brain feels dead.
….my soul needs to be led.
….my heart wants to be fed.
But right now I walk with an empty heart and soul.
Trying to let go once and for all.
Hoping that I can once again feel whole.







"the greatest power is the power of goodbye"
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re-dear diary

Post  Eloquent_Poet on Sun Mar 23, 2008 12:57 pm

This is for your diary,Is gonna be very frank and forward,hence "Alicia keys" I apologize early and i'm sorry.
Though truth be told our true emotions lay on these platform of forums,thus everything we imply here is heart set.
I 've seen so many inadequate answers to what love really means, but yet,no one seems to satisfy it.Kind of like the fairy tale myth of soul mate,which eventually evolved imaginative cult..To achieve this people are taking desperate leaps,the process of true love has been been put fast forward harboring b/f g/f and later begetting one night stand...Wait,let me not get ahead of my self and explain something.....

definition of Grazing: to check the grass before entering the ballfields a.k.a pre'marital relationships....
mother thought morals dictate who i end up with...
media belligerence dictates who you end up with...
those slim curves and virgin faces you yearn for got you twisted your mind polluted...
sit back and observe,your taking for granted the "soul" in soul mate..
check yourself though? haven't we all.?Nothing to be sad and mad about...
we all played around dated this dated that regretted this enjoyed that.. hated her/him . and shouldn't of done thats?
we're living in a culture where were taught to search for this and that and never to stand straight and take our own glimpse through the looking glass.
this is not a poem Coco but a straight forward piece. not a leisure but a thought...
proven point back to sqaure one...
whats with the girlfreind boyfreind hype...
sure you really wanna know a person before you marry them but why do half of 10yrs plus relationships turn sour an hour after the proposal sinks in.
lets rejoice in our perfected religion and learn from our mistakes and stay away from the common grazing of the ballfield people.

g/f/b/f hype just make me sick it's really ridiculous i would feel like i'm back in grade school calling a women my "girlfreind" were not assimilating a decade into this new culture are we? it' would feel more mature to call one proper as a wife and a husband wouldn't it?.

The moral of the story..
your soul is your essence and your mate is your check; so check your essence hence'forth a lesson in mind from a peasant back in time<<--- u can call me traditional or fundamental but in the end i know i'm not missing nothing ...just staying mental and sane, rather put it blunt and plain then to hide this ..why weap in sorrow alone in a drench of rain *"someday" regret past sins when your judgment comes. you know your gonna ask to be sent back in time to correct your sins so HERE's YOUR CHANCE YOUR IN the present so play your cards right because everybody knows theres always a joker in the game of poker.


The greatest power is the power of mind over matter


Last edited by Eloquent_Poet on Sun Apr 27, 2008 7:36 am; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : Make I Alive with bit of Ovlive)
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Re: Dear Diary

Post  Admin on Fri Mar 28, 2008 2:55 am

Coconut,
I sincerely liked your piece, and I can feel the sadness in your words. A good poet is, one that you can feel and sense their script and relate or interpret their articulation into your own life.

Eloquent,

"There were those bitter days, when I went on a journey to bitter ways, while chicks were looking for sticks, and sticks were looking for couple of gigs in hope for licks --I was aiming for higher altitude, to avoid conflicts with Gods‘ cruel verdicts. See, girlfriend and boyfriend type of hype never contented my vibe, instead I jibe between my likes in real life while being awakened with fife --every morning I’m a alive, I remain to survive, until the day I become a wife."

I wrote that not long ago, and I can view the resembles of what you wrote, as to what I wrote while back. Lol

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Re: Dear Diary

Post  coconut0 on Sun Mar 30, 2008 8:53 am

Admin thanks.

Eloquent thanks for your input aswell!
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Re: Dear Diary

Post  Admin on Sat Apr 26, 2008 2:39 am



I was bored, and thought to reply to all the questions you had.

What if the love that’s taken away, actually decayed?
What if that special someone felt betrayed and his passions fade,
What if he wanted to stay, but the love you made required aide?
And the only way to escape was to evade, all the promises he made,
And,
Fair game, sometimes ought to be attained,
Love is contained—not imitated or framed,
It can be a joyride –as long as you hold tight,
But if you let go, its’ going to be a cold flight,
Like the ordinary game, one has to loose,
And is left to pay up the dues,
While you’re trying to puzzle the clues,
You become out of use –and find an excuse,
…on how the other is obtuse,
…and this love of deuce is now only ONE,
Yet, no one has won.
But ‘Love’ is a portion of lives’ satisfaction,
We live in hope of finding true passion,
A simple abstraction, a happy attraction,
A chain of reaction, a strong interaction,
At times, unable to recognize –what’s passing
…if it is forged or a true passion,
Yearning to find chemical rotations,
Butterflies and inter connections,
“Be careful!” they say,
But how can you display,
When ‘love’ is all you convey,
And love can be far from happiness,
That’s why some smile with bitterness…
But those who are strong, just move on,
Don’t dwell in the paste, singing sad songs.

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Re: Dear Diary

Post  coconut0 on Mon Jun 16, 2008 3:56 am

lol Admin u were so bored that u just felt like replying to all the questions i had miyaa, i see wax ba i dhaafay while i was gone anywayz i dont think i'll be able to post a reply anytime soon, am on a tour through africa, amaizing wallahi!


ps. I like the post, also the new one on your blog is nice even though am finding it a little hard to comprehend.
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Re: Dear Diary

Post  Eloquent_Poet on Thu Jun 19, 2008 10:34 am

lol..Stop singing Sad songs...
well put,you could have replied on the other thread ...lol..
It would have found a great place there as well...


Forgetful as I like to be
Unsettling my luck seems to be
Cunning forces and fierce emotion
Killing me slowly on a notion
I'm must be fool
Not knowing when to stop
Going gets tough,the tough remains steady
Because of faulty love
In the end,does it even matter
Till death,gets the best of us
Calling of earths dirt
Has never been sweet to my ears
Everlasting peace awaits beneath
Sentencing,the heart that could never love again




Ps..Do you ever read the CAPS..
Of my poems..lol
My apologies...Admin...
Just How i felt at the time..Good Or bad..Just me.. Laughing
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